Monday, February 25, 2013

The History of Rubbish by 4 eso B




5000 years of rubbish and recycling

SUMMARY 1

-Recycling and rubbish started 5000 years ago and we have improved it until today
Recycling started in Athens where the government said to people, they had to throw rubbish 2km out of the city, later in China people transform organic rubbish into compost that was used to grow plants in the garden. Afterwards, in London streets became dirty and full of rubbish, people didn’t worry about it but the government said rubbish had to be thrown out of the city, but some people burned it. At the same time in Germany, a new law said that who came to city with carts full of food had to leave the city and throw the rubbish out. The worst problems of rubbish were connected with factories, because they made many diseases and people died Young.
Concluding with, recycling has been presented in some countries as Athens, China, Germany… And it has been presented in different ways.

SUMMARY 2 

This text explains the history of the rubbish and recycling from 5,000 years till now.

When people started making rubbish in Athens, they created landfills, but these landfills was more different than the present landfills. In some places like China people composted their rubbish and in England people burnt the rubbish. Later, workers were employed to take the rubbish. The problem of rubbish started when the factorys appeared and a lot of people came to the towns, so the towns got bigger and dirtier.
Many people died because there were many disease.

Concluding with, nowadays, people recycle more and better and this activity is more important than in the past.

SUMMARY 3

Since 3000 BC to the present times rubbish has been recycled in landfills, depending the culture.
In Anthens there were some landfills about 2 Km outside the city. In China the people made compost with the rubbish, to use it in the garden, like now. In England people throw their rubbish outsite the door. But later they burned their rubbish.
In London the streets where so dirty. In Germany the people carried away the rubbish out to the countryside. Now the rubbish came from factories and from peoples house.
So we think that in the past there were less rubbish than today.

SUMMARY 4
People learn to recicle in the earliest times, because the accumulation of rubbish become a problem.

In the earliest times they wasn't much rubbish.All the rest food that they eat, they burn it or they put in to the ground. The problem of waste began when the cities were bornt, like Knonosos. In China, they composted their rubbish. This way, made good plantations and they profit the rubbish. But in England, in 1297 the government punished the people who throw rubbish outside their houses, but the biggest problem was with the appearance of industries , people got health problems thanks to the rubbish accumulation.

Concluding with we thing that the rubbish is a global problem in all the world, away to avoid it is recycling a much more or make renewable things

SUMMARY 5

The evolution of recycling rubbish comes from 3000 B.C.
The problem of wasting began over 2500 years ago in Athens. In China the people put all their bits of old vegetables and fruit in a place outside and left it there. They used their compost to grow up young plants. In England people who lived in town throw their rubbish outside the door but in 1299 the government said they would punish them. In 1354 the government began to employ special workers to take the rubbish away. In Germany they made a new law that prohibit left the rubbish in the city. Now rubbish comes from factories as well as from people houses.
In all this time we have improved how to recycle, but now there’s a lot of rubbish, that we can recycle

SUMMARY 6 

In the earliest times there were not towns. The people lived in small groups, there weren't alot of rubbish. The problem started when the people went to live in the towns, because they created a lot of rubbish.

One of the biggest problem was that the people left the rubbish outside their houses, in the street,      because the landfill sites where outside the towns. It made difficult that de people couldn't walk in them. In 1354 the governement began to empty special workers to take the rubbish away. In China, 2000 BC, for example people composted their rubbish. This means that they put all their bits of old vegetables and fruit in one place outside and left in there. After a few months it changed into a rich brown material called compost, which is very good for plants, there are importants problems, but the biggest problem in the world started when the machines and factories were boilt.

The people left their village and came to live and work in the towns, so the towns got bigger and dirtier. There were many diseases in town. Doctor said that many diseases came from dirty houses and rubbish.


 

5 comments:

  1. In my point of view, the Summary number 6 is the best because it has three parts: introduction, paragraph and conlusion.
    The text is clear to understand and I think that it is well-explained.
    For thta reason, I will vote the summary number 6!

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  2. In my opinion, the summary 4 and 6 are the best, because both have the three elemental parts: introduction, paragraph and conclusion. On the other hand, both are the best organized and expressed. Moreover, the text is very clear. So, in my point of view, this two summaries are the best.

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  3. In my view the best Summary of the History of Rubbish by 4 eso B is the number 6 since it has introduction, development and conclusion as other summaries but in this summary are clearly differentiated the 3 parts.
    What's more this summary is easier to understand and it is better explained.
    To sum up I give my vote to summary number 6.


    Aleix Peñaranda Valenzuela

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  4. Ariadna Arriola CabelloMarch 31, 2013 at 1:29 PM

    As far as I'm converned the best summary writted about the History of Rubbish by the students of 4 Eso B is the lasted, I mind the number 6. The reason that make me choose it is because first it has a few introduction about the mean idea. Then it has a paragraph that develop the history about rubbish with some examples that happened in some countries. What's more, it has a clear conclusion about what consequences can it produces. Also I have to say that it very clear what it is wrrited in a easy way to understand but without neglecting all the vocabulary that is used.

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  5. In my point of view, after reading these summaries, the Summary 6 is which I've voted.
    On one hand this summary has the structure that it has to follow, with the introduction, the explanation and finally, the conclusion. On the other hand in this summary we can see that the students who did it, know very well the vocabulary and english grammar.
    Finally, I just need to say that this summary is better than the other, with a clear difference. Without offending anyone.

    Ernest Carles Pujol

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