Monday, February 25, 2013

The History of Rubbish by 4 eso A

500 YEARS OF RUBBISH AND RECYCLING

SUMMARY 1
The story of the rubbish started 5000 years ago and it seems it won’t finish until people get aware.

Over 2500 years ago there were a lot of problems wish rubbish and people threw all of their rubbish on the streets, and the government of Athens said they did not want a landfill, so they threw it on the outsides of the cities.

In China 2000 B.C, people composted their rubbish, but in England the streets became very dirty and the government said that people had to burn the rubbish instead of throwing it on the street. In the middle age in Germany decided to carry the rubbish away to the country side.



Today the problem of the rubbish continues because machines and factories made lot of pollution so we must finish this problem.

SUMMARY 2

The text talk about the history of recycling for 5000 years of history.
All the problems began when people started to live in towns and did more rubbish than normal. Than the people decided to start recycling, like China. But not all the people in England did it, there were people that throw the rubbish outside the houses. For this, the streets smelt very bad. The government started to do laws to disagree people to throw the rubbish. At last the people throw the rubbish outside the city. Later in Germany people did the same. The cities started to be cleaner.
But the world’s biggest problem become to the factories and the people.

SUMMARY 3 


Rubbish and the recycling have always been in our life.

In the earliest times, people did not have much rubbish. In a lot of cities, people composted their rubbish. After a few months this material called compost, is very good for plants. But the compost wasn't used, so the people throw it on the streets and this caused a lot of health problems.
In this way, in different places, the people invented new technology for a better life for us.

Now, the rubbish came from factories and doesn't disturb so much as in the past times but the problem goes on.

SUMMARY 4

The evolution of the recycle started 5000 years ago. Over 2500 years in Athens, the people hat to take all the rubbish outside the city. Later, in China in 2000 B.C the people composted the rubbish and in England in 1297 the people burnt the rubbish in the houses. In 1354, England and Germany began to employ special workers to take the rubbish out the cities. But the world biggest problem with rubbish began when machines and factories were built, and the towns got bigger and dirtier, and this problem continues today.


 

10 comments:

  1. Angel Miranda MosqueraMarch 20, 2013 at 8:43 AM

    In my opinion the best summary is summury 1 because they have include three parts that a text must have (introduction, summary and conclusion).
    That summary is not large each paragraph is 2 to 4 lines, that's make it easy and quickly read.
    2n Batxillerat
    Angel

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  2. the best one is summary 3 because it resumes the principal ideas and these are diferentiated by paragraphs, with an introduction, a body and a conclution.

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  3. In my point of view I think the best two are the 1st and the 3rd. They have a complete structure and are separated in different paragraphs, and have a good summary at all. They have the necessary words, not more than expected in a summary. But at the end If I have to choose one, I think I choose the 3rd because is more coherent than the first. In the first there are so many years, but it hasn't as many linkers as the 3rd has.

    Gerard Casas

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  4. As far as I am concerned, the best summary is the third because it has an introduction, a body and a conclusion very defined that makes it very easy to read and find the information. Isn't it what we look for in a summary?

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  5. In my opinion the best one is summary 1. First, because of the structure of the summary: the text is well structured in paragraphs and each one is for a different period. Second, I think that this summary is the most interesting since talks about things that people usually don't know that is the history of the rubbish. Third, because is really easy to read and understand, in my opinion is the best in this point of view. So, I choose summary 1.

    Fran Martín, 2 Batxillerat

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  6. According to me, the bests summaries are the first and the third because are the ones that synthetize the information better. They have the correct structure: introduction, paragraphs and conclusion, and they expose the information correctly, using the properly vocabulary that the text requires.
    The difference between the fist and the third summary is that the third is too much summarized; I mean I think that there is important information left, that the first one has.
    Mireia Majós

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  7. I think the best one is summary 1 because it synthesize very well rubbish history from 5000 years ago to nowadays. The text is clear and it is not boring to read, and it has a good struchture in paragraphs that invites you to read it. The other summaries have just a huge paragraph and it doesn't make a first good look to me.

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  8. In my point of view, I think that the best summary in 4eso are number third.It's very clear and the history is well explained. The grammar it's correct too and the estructure has all the things that a summary needs.I have to introudce that it's not quite long so everybody can read and undestand.
    Of course,all of them are interesting to read and I supouse that now they know everything about our planet and what we have to do to save it.

    Paula Sánchez

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  9. In my opinion the best summary is number 4, it lacks the structure of separated parts in paragraphs, but, as I see it, it is the best summary refering to grammar, and it is easy to understand. It is direct and although it is one-piece text, it does have an introduction and a conclusion. The others are a bit confusing because of the mix of past tenses and present tenses, but in summary 4 I understood it all and I think it is quite good.

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  10. After reading the summaries, I have decided to vote for the summary number one.

    First, I have analyzed the structure of all the texts. To be a well done text It must be divided into paragraphs including the introduction and the conclusion.

    In my opinion, the summaries that have the best structure are the summary number one and the summary number three.

    Finally I have decided to vote for the text number one because each paragraph is about a theme and that is more pleasant for the reader.

    Judith Aguirrezabal, 2n Batxillerat BIO

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