Monday, February 25, 2013
Vote the Best Summary
Students of 2nd batxillerat are going to vote which is the best summary written by students of 4 ESO.
We have been studying in 4th ESO the layout of a summary in order to know how to synthesize a large text and students of 2n Batx, as they are experts in this type of writing, they will easily recognize the best one, leaving a comment of their opinion.
The History of Rubbish by 4 eso A
500 YEARS OF RUBBISH AND RECYCLING
SUMMARY 1
The story of the
rubbish started 5000 years ago and it seems it won’t finish until people get
aware.
Over 2500 years ago
there were a lot of problems wish rubbish and people threw all of their rubbish
on the streets, and the government of Athens said they did not want a landfill,
so they threw it on the outsides of the cities.
In China 2000 B.C,
people composted their rubbish, but in England the streets became very dirty
and the government said that people had to burn the rubbish instead of throwing
it on the street. In the middle age in Germany decided to carry the rubbish
away to the country side.
Today the problem of
the rubbish continues because machines and factories made lot of pollution so
we must finish this problem.
SUMMARY 2
The text talk about the history of recycling for 5000
years of history.
All the problems began when people started to live in
towns and did more rubbish than normal. Than the people decided to start
recycling, like China. But not all the people in England did it, there were
people that throw the rubbish outside the houses. For this, the streets smelt
very bad. The government started to do laws to disagree people to throw the
rubbish. At last the people throw the rubbish outside the city. Later in
Germany people did the same. The cities started to be cleaner.
But the world’s biggest problem become to the factories
and the people.
SUMMARY 3
Rubbish
and the recycling have always been in our life.
In the
earliest times, people did not have much rubbish. In a lot of cities, people composted
their rubbish. After a few months this material called compost, is very good
for plants. But the compost wasn't used, so the people throw it on the streets
and this caused a lot of health problems.
In this
way, in different places, the people invented new technology for a better life
for us.
Now, the
rubbish came from factories and doesn't disturb so much as in the past times
but the problem goes on.
SUMMARY 4
The evolution of the recycle started 5000 years
ago. Over 2500 years in Athens, the people hat to take all the rubbish outside
the city. Later, in China in 2000 B.C the people composted the rubbish and in
England in 1297 the people burnt the rubbish in the houses. In 1354, England
and Germany began to employ special workers to take the rubbish out the cities.
But the world biggest problem with rubbish began when machines and factories
were built, and the towns got bigger and dirtier, and this problem continues
today.
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